Saturday, April 15, 2006

74/365 Mary Helen,

normally quick and determined, dragged her feet from Boston Common to the top of the subway’s escalator. At the parking lot she stops, weighs carefully the seventeenness of her daughter and me, glances at the RV, says, “Girls, they’re making love.” So we wait.

4 Comments:

Blogger Otter said...

Wowzers!
..........
waitung.....
....still waiting....
Well?
You ARE going to give us more than just that?
You little tease.

April 15, 2006 12:47 PM  
Blogger Indigo Bunting said...

Sadly, I had only 44 words, and this draft started at nearly double that. We were all on vacation in a motor home, along with a couple that really needed to have some alone time, apparently.

April 15, 2006 5:39 PM  
Blogger Sewa Yoleme said...

"When the RV's rockin', don't come a-knockin'...."

April 15, 2006 8:28 PM  
Blogger Indigo Bunting said...

Yes, Yoleme, that was exactly it.

April 16, 2006 4:44 PM  

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